I redid the cover without text. Henry's also a tad bit slimmer, but not too slim. I think slightly pudgy characters are rather adorable.
I'm currently reworking the story text and dummy. I'm going to take a break on the story for now since it's still not quite right. And will begin fleshing out the book dummy sketches.
With the story, it's not poetic enough. I'd like my words to sing, to feel like unwrapping chocolates, to feel like a treat, like a Roald Dahl poem.